英文作文訂正

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Original Text:

Hello, I am writing to introduce a new product - the smartwatch. This watch can tell the time, but it also has many other functions, such as fitness tracking and receiving emails. It is very convenient to use and has a long battery life. I think it will be a great gift for people who love technology and sports.

Corrected Text:

Hello, I am writing to introduce a new product - the smartwatch. This watch can tell the time, but it also has many other functions, such as fitness tracking and sending emails. It is very convenient to use and has a long battery life. I think it would make a great gift for people who love technology and fitness.

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