Little fairy

In a beautiful forest, live a few good friends - monkey particles, rabbit red and puppy wangwang. One day, the three good partners of grain, red and Wangwang went to play together, and they decided to go to the opposite cave. Red and red said: "Okay, okay, listen to my mother saying that there is my favorite radish." "But it is dangerous to go to the opposite cave!" Wangwang opened. It turns out that going to the cave must go through three rivers, and one is more urgent than one. The grain said: "It doesn't matter, it doesn't matter, everyone unites and overcomes the difficulties together. Isn't it?!" "Okay! Let's go!" Want Want said. So, three good partners looked around for wood, and the wood was found. Wangwang found the carpenter and made a boat. The three were ready for food and the clothes were set off. One by one, they jumped on the boat and the three took turns on duty. A few days ago, it was good to go to the third river, and their food was almost gone. Red red said: "Everyone can save some food!" After a few days, the food is gone, they drifted on the water for a while, and suddenly one day, the water is getting more and more urgent, and a strong wind blows them. On the other side, it is not so easy to go to the cave. There is a huge stone in front of the cave, and the three small companions come to the front of the huge stone. With the last strength, they push the boulder hard, and the good sports grain screams the password: "One two one, one two one, One two one..." The boulder began to move... "Hey!" The boulder was pushed away, and the three good partners fell to the ground. They were not only because of hunger but also because of fatigue. After a little more, they woke up. The first thing they saw was a beautiful and wonderful scenery: on the red side, the world of radishes, there are water radishes, white radishes... A European restaurant, but also specializes in barbecue, bones and the like. The grain is surrounded by a large fruit garden. Each tree has different fruits. After eating one, it grows out quickly. It’s amazing. They have been hungry for three days, they can't wait to eat it.... Teacher's comment: This is an imaginative fairy tale. The little author fictionalized three little friends living in the forest. They went together. Expedition in the opposite cave, after many difficulties, I finally came to the cave and got the food I wanted. Through this fairy tale, the little author told everyone that as long as they work hard, any difficulty can be overcome. The article is cleverly conceived, the narrative is clear, and the story is very strong. "Living this good friend" should be "live three good friends." "There is a huge stone in front of the cave." "One" should be "one piece." "A little more for a while" should be "a good time." "The red side" should be "on the red side". "The speed of the news has grown out" should be "and quickly grow out." 2009-8-2 21:41:00

Little fairy

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