Adventure in a fairy tale book 1

Summer vacation is coming, I am eating snacks at home and watching TV. "叮咚-叮咚" The doorbell rang, and someone sent me a package. I ripped it apart three times and five, but I didn't expect a beautiful pencil to be placed next to a fairy tale book. “Who would send a storybook to me?” I looked at the list, not who I wrote, it’s weird. "No matter, look at it first." I said with a pencil and opened the story book. A sly story book fell to the ground, I disappeared... At this time, I am here: "Ah----------------" The sky fell. "Oh, it hurts me." I patted the soil on my clothes and looked at the trees all around. I thought, "Where is this, I was not at home?" .... After half an hour............... "Yeah! I remembered." I patted the back of my head. "If I remember correctly, I will In the fairy tale book...that is the forest trail in 'Little Red Riding Hood'... Teacher's comment: This is the beginning of a serial story. The text explains the background of the story and the cause of the event, letting the reader know what is going to happen. The story has a well-prepared mental preparation. Relatively speaking, I think the first paragraph of this article is written quite well. The little author used a narration in the text, which may increase the readability of the composition. I feel that this writing will distract readers from the essays and let the readers who have entered the essays come back to reality. Imagining essays must also be based on certain realities, so Imagine essays to test the authors. Writing ability, also test the imagination of the small author, it is more difficult to write. It is recommended that the author should not write difficult composition, write more familiar subjects and genre composition, so as to improve their writing ability. More .2010-8-9 16:11:00

Adventure in a fairy tale book 1

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