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Baotu Spring in his hometown


My hometown is in Jinan, famous for its spring water. The most famous of them is Baotu Spring.

Mother took me to Baotu Spring to play. When I was far away from Baotu Spring, I heard the sound of "咕咚咕咚". What do I think is the sound of something? I came to the spring by the sound, and I saw three springs rushing out of the water. The three springs were the highest in the middle. The three springs spouted like a floating fireworks and a rotating wheel.

In the spring, the weeping willow girl dipped her hair into the Baotu Spring, washing her soft long hair. The little fish swims to the willow girl's hair as if to say: "You can be beautiful in the willow sister, or else a poem called "Wang Liu" is not to praise you!" Visitors took photos as a good memory.

In the winter, the spring rises up with a thin layer of fog like a layer of white gauze around the spring, the surrounding attic. The rockery and the long column are like a fairyland. In the fifteenth time, the dragon spring is more beautiful under the illumination of the lantern.

This is Baotu Spring, very beautiful!

Shandong Dongying Shengli 17th Grade 3: Zhang Yulin

Comments: The small author grasps the characteristics of Baotu Spring, and uses the rhetorical method to vividly write the different scenery of Baotu Spring in the spring and winter period. It is a successful work!

Comments Teacher: Teacher Zhou Kui

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