Hometown change

The sun and the moon are like a shuttle, and the time is like an arrow. In a blink of an eye, the hometown has changed without knowing it. Let me tell you something!

I remember a few years ago, I went back to my hometown, Zhengzhou. At this time, the road there was made of earth, and the rainy road became dirty. When you stepped on it, people's shoes were full of dirt, which was very annoying. There were no trash cans before, and the garbage was thrown everywhere. Some people dumped the garbage into the crystal clear river. Some people even killed cows on the grass by the river, threw the skeleton of the cow into the river, and made the blood of the cows all over the place, very abominable!

As people's economic level and environmental awareness have increased, my hometown has undergone earth-shaking changes, and I don't believe you.

The streets in my hometown have become very wide, and some garbage bins have been placed around them. People no longer litter the garbage, and the streets have become very clean and tidy. The surrounding trees become lush and lush. The river has once again become crystal clear, and the green grass is like a green carpet, which is a good place for people to play and travel. Nowadays, there is no dirt road that makes people walk. The change in my hometown is really big!

what! In the past few years, the changes in my hometown are really big! It has become a mountain surrounded by green mountains and waters. It constitutes a beautiful picture. As a Zhengzhou person, why not be proud of it!

The third grade of the political road of Zhengzhou Erqi District, Henan Province: Zheng Qi

Comments: Through the contrast of the method of writing the changes in the hometown, to express the love of hometown, very good. The structure is clear, in which the metaphor is used to make the language vivid, and the ending point is clear. In the introduction of the current hometown section, "Now, there is no dirt road in the pit, so that people can walk easily." This sentence should be placed in the section of the street to say that the street is more clear.

Review Teacher: Fu Dong Teacher