Spring peak

As the saying goes: "The beauty of Lushan is in Shannan, and the beauty of Shannan is in Xiufeng." On Sunday, I and my classmates and I embarked on a journey to Xiufeng.

The scenery along the way is beautiful, the green rice fields, the golden rape blossoms, the blue sky, and picturesque.

When we arrived at Xiufeng, we entered a mountain gate. We saw a statue of Li Bai and a very large stone book introducing Xiufeng. We all climbed up to take photos.

At the foot of Xiufeng, we started the mountain climbing competition. I climbed up and down with my hands and feet, and climbed up the stairs two times in a row. Like a little monkey, I left my classmates far behind.

"Flying straight down three thousand feet, suspected that the Milky Way fell for nine days." We came to the Guanting Pavilion and saw a waterfall flying down and making a huge noise. Suddenly, I found white smoke rising from the height of the waterfall. I think, this is the so-called "Rizhao incense burner, purple smoke", it is spectacular!

After some hard work, we finally climbed to the top of the mountain, looking at the distant city and the beautiful Poyang Lake, feeling refreshed! After a short break, we sat on the cable car and laid down leisurely.

Tourism not only broadened my horizons, increased my knowledge, cultivated my sentiments, but also enriched my after-school life.

Third grade: Hu Yangming

Comments: The small author repeatedly quotes ancient poetry in the text, and can properly quote and express his feelings, which is very reasonable and true. When describing the Xiufeng, the small author not only wrote the beautiful scenery of Xiufeng, but also expressed his love for nature. The details of Mount Xiufeng are vivid and meticulous, and it is a very good writing story.

Comments Teacher: Teacher Chen Kailun