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Tenacious life


Life is short-lived, life is limited, but I can make finite life manifest infinite life value.

The vitality of the grass is the most tenacious. Autumn is here, the grass on the campus is wearing golden clothes and withering. Yellow grass can be seen everywhere on the campus, like a yellow carpet. But we are very sorry for some grasses, we believe that grass has no vitality, we are very sad.

The spring girl returned to school with a light step. Wow! The spring breeze blows, the grass is green, and it seems to have just emerged from the arms of Mother Earth. Green and oily, how beautiful. The grass sometimes stretches out its arms, sometimes dancing, and sometimes beckoning. As the poet said, "The wildfire is not burning, and the spring breeze is born again."

One afternoon, the sky was overcast, and then there was a downpour with the cool breeze. It’s sunny, I think: The grass must be dying by the wind. I have to go and have a look. Just ran to the playground to see. My heart suddenly stunned, the grassland did not die, just lying on the ground. I believe that it will stand up slowly after a while. Sure enough, I did not expect. The grass slowly straightened up, even though the face still had crystal tears. They seem to be proud to say: "Look, how strong we are!"

Yes, everyone has the power to live, and anyone can create a colorful world of their own. The surface of the grass looks weak, but the heart is strong! These inconspicuous grasses are stepping on people, and they are stepping on it. It has no regrets, no selfless dedication, and it is worth learning. The ordinary grass gave me such revelation.

Fourth grade: Zhu Bixia

Comments: This article is a slogan, expressing the feelings of life through the growth of grass, the theme is very good. The use of anthropomorphic rhetorical methods in many places in the text is vivid. However, it should be noted that the final point should be consistent with the previous one. The previous expression is vitality, but the final end is about the dedication of the grass, which seems a bit off center.

Review Teacher: Fu Dong Teacher

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