Proposal for Yang Hongying Auntie

Dear Yang Hongying, Auntie:

Hello there!

The classmates in our class especially like to read the books you wrote, and watch them all day. Seeing this scene, I also went to buy a "Laughing Cat Diary."

I opened the book and read it carefully. Found that there are a lot of nonsense inside, but the plot is not bad! Because of the good story, I bought several "Laughing Cat Diaries."

Later, the more I read the more boring, and changed to buy other books...

Yang Hongying Auntie is my suggestion to you, please do not "suggest".

1. Yang Hongying Auntie, the book you wrote is a good story, but there is more nonsense and it should be improved.

2. Yang Hongying, Auntie, you should also modify it in the plot, so that it will be good and become excellent!

3. Yang Hongying, aunt, you should use more good words.

4. Yang Hongying, aunt, you should highlight the key points, don't obviously talk about tiger cats, but talk about sunset.

The above is my opinion on the book written by Yang Hongying, aunt, although not much, but it is still precious. Oh...

Yang Hongying, Auntie, I will give you a sentence at the end: Childlike heart is like a bottomless pit. It is difficult to guess and difficult to understand. No matter what anyone writes about the childlike heart, it is good to write, and only writes the surface of childlikeness...

Suggested by: Tang Yuan

August 1, 2019

Fifth grade: Dream Raspberry Rain