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Xia Yu


Xia girl came quietly, and when she came, she added a bit of anger to the earth. The sun father violently emits the heat of his body. The weather is particularly hot, knowing that in the tree "hot death! Hot death!" People are like roasting in a steamer, only a moment later, they are already sweating. More and more people are enjoying the cool under the big trees.

Suddenly, the sky slowly darkened, looking into the distance, the entire sky was clouded and looked like a big black pot. It’s really the day of June, the face of the doll, it’s changed, it’s just a clear sky, and now it’s clouded. I saw the wind violently blowing, blowing the window "beep" and the tree seemed to be blown down by it. People collect clothes, close the windows, and some people who rush home on the road! Suddenly, the lightning "squeaky" sound like a sharp sword generally cut through the sky. Even Lei Gonggong came to join in the fun, and his "bang" was like a thunder, it was really unbearable!

Just when the day was dark, a drop of raindrops on the beans fell and it began to rain. The old man was as strong as a slap, and the sound of the slamming was getting bigger and bigger, falling down. Those who have not yet returned home have become "falling chickens" and have to go to the shops or the eaves of the house to shelter from the rain. In this way, these places have become places for people to shelter from the rain.

The rain was getting bigger and bigger, and the front of the house became a small stream. These creeks gathered together and became the "Yellow River." People who couldn't return home looked at the scene and frowned.

Later, the rain became smaller, and people rushed to the rain and went home...

The rain finally stopped, the window was opened, and the fresh air caught the scent of the mud, and the trees were very clean after being washed by the rain.

Rain, you come at the right time, you poured water for the rice fields, you took a shower for the trees, you washed away all the dirty dirt for the earth!

Commentary: Anthropomorphic, metaphorical, appropriate, intertwined, unconventional, sensational, and blending scenery into a diverse performance space, showing us a different summer rain scene. Very unique and very smart.

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