Beauty, right next to me

In the early morning, we came to the Eight Diagrams, where the scenery is two words - wonderful. Walking into the forest of the Eight Diagrams, it is like walking into the embrace of the mountains!
With the cool mountain wind, the car drove to the door of a farmer's house. When we got off the bus, we went to pick kiwifruit. The brown kiwis were covered with branches and the branches were bent over. There are some spiders on the leaves. In the middle of the two kiwi trees, the nets are laid down, and the mouth keeps moving. It seems to say to people: "This is my food, don't want to grab it with me." The eyes are really sharp, and they are picking the big, mature kiwi. Some kiwis on the tree are two connected together, just like twins.
Next, we went to a crystal clear stream. There are so many small fish in the stream, and each one swims fast, like a broken arrow. However, our opponent is a fierce crab. Our eyes are very sharp, and as long as the crab moves gently we can grab it.
The Qishui Mountain is really beautiful, there are rushing springs, and there are streams of creeks... just like a vivid landscape painting.

Comments: The article focuses on two things: picking kiwifruit and catching crabs. The details of the article are well controlled. In particular, the description of kiwifruit is very good, using anthropomorphic rhetoric. A little bit of a deficiency is the process of catching the crab. If you can describe the details in detail, it would be better.
Zhongshan Jiangxiao third grade Chen Jiangyu