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Who cares about me?


There are four people in my family, father, mother, brother and me, but I always feel that I am not a member of this family. I don’t know if I am a girl or because I am not good enough. I am so inconspicuous. Asking: In this family, who cares about me!

After school, the world was raining, the students went home, and I was alone waiting in the rain. Watching them hold hands with Mom and Dad, I am really envious, so envious... My brother is very smart and very likable, so I don’t like to talk, it becomes a bad boy who loves a lot of people.

I went back to the house with rain. The adults blamed me for coming back so late, but I didn't think about it. I didn't even look at myself in front of me. Is the child soaked with high fever? My body is very cold, but my heart is colder. I always feel that I am superfluous. Who really cares about me.

I looked at the rain outside and fell asleep unconsciously. In my dreams, there are my father and mother who love me, and my brother who hurts me. Maybe only in a dream, I can laugh happily once. I really hope that I have been dreaming all the time, and I don’t want to wake up.

Fourth grade: 舆廖緈语缘絯雯

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