my hobby

My hobby is to observe small animals. Because the little animals are so cute! I have observed rabbits, squirrels, goldfish, crickets, frogs, ducks, chickens... I like to watch rabbits the most. It has white fur on its body and feels soft and comfortable. It has a pair of red eyes, like two rubies. There are long ears on the head, the cutest is the three-petal mouth of the white rabbit. When it eats radish, the mouth moves very small, but it is very crunchy and looks very cute. It has short front legs and long hind legs. It is really fascinating to walk and dance. The little white rabbit can run fast! In the tortoise and the hare, if the white rabbit is not proud, it must be faster than the turtle. what! Observing small animals is a happy thing. Teacher's Comments: At the beginning of the essay, the author writes his own hobby to observe small animals. This way of writing is fast and does not drag the water. This article describes the little author's favorite animal, the little white rabbit. Observation. The small author first used the description of color: "There is a white hair" "It has a pair of red eyes, like two rubies." The color and the use of metaphors make the reader's understanding of the rabbit more intuitive. The author also made a tactile description: “Touching the softness”, so the impression of the bunny is more specific. "The long ears are on the head, the cutest is the three-petal mouth of the little white rabbit." This is a static description of the bunny; "When it eats radish, the mouth moves very small, but it chews very badly." "It has short front legs, long hind legs, and walks and jumps." This is a dynamic description of the bunny. It combines movement and static to show the cuteness of the bunny. "The little white rabbit can run fast! In the tortoise and the hare, if the white rabbit is not proud, it must be faster than the turtle." This is not a free pen, it expresses the little author's love for the little rabbit. . 2009-2-22 9:59:00

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