memory

I think, maybe memory, is a kind of research. Reunion, let our smile become a deep lily, the lily that blooms slowly. Finally, it gave off a sweet fragrance. Teacher's comment: The article is very short, but the writing is very beautiful. In the fresh and natural narrative, the truth is surging. The author is very good at digging the charm behind the text. "I think, maybe memory is a test," the author wrote. But what is the memory of research? The author did not answer directly. Instead, I continued to write: "Reunion, let our smile become the lily that blooms in the deep valley. Finally, it gives off a sweet fragrance." This kind of jumping thought implies infinite meaning, we can Guessing memory is a test of friendship. Because of the good memory, the reunion becomes more long and more exciting. In addition, the author compares the “reunion of the reunion” to “the lily that blooms in the deep valley”, which visualizes the abstract feeling, and makes the readers understand the sweetness of the reunion. This kind of writing is also worth learning. The only downside is that the length of the article is too short. I hope that the small author can write a longer article with such a beautiful writing and delicate strokes next time. 2009-5-31 15:27:00

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