happy mid-Autumn Festival

In the morning, I got out of bed~ brushed my teeth~ washed my face. . . . . . After a while, the phone rang, and it turned out that my sister had come over. I said, "Happy Mid-Autumn Festival!" She said: "Happy Mid-Autumn Festival!" I said, "What are you looking for?" she said: Come to my house to eat at night!" At noon, my sister came to play at my house. She is playing with me on the blackboard. She told me to write on the blackboard today to take a ruler and start class. She took the card and said, "Look at the boy to win, or the girl to win." The result was won by the girl. I have a great time with my sister. In the evening, my sister and I ate the lobster with relish. I don't know why the moon is so round in the Mid-Autumn Festival. I asked my mother why it is a round moon? Mom said: "Now is fifteen, so so round!" I am so happy during the Mid-Autumn Festival! Teacher's Comments: The article details the experience of the small author in the Mid-Autumn Festival, and presents the happy life of the day in the article. Play with your sister, eat lobster and enjoy the moon with your family. The warm family atmosphere is filled with words. The article is fluent in language and narrative. But some sentences still need attention from small authors! "My sister and I have eaten the lobster with relish" should be "the lobster that my sister and I tasted with relish." 2009-7-6 20:04:00

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