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Aunt, my essay won the prize.


Dear Aunt:

Hello!

Time flies so fast, I haven't seen you for more than half a year, I miss you very much.

Do you still remember, the summer of the previous year, you came to my house to read the composition I wrote, read it a few times in a word, you said that I have great writing potential, you still have to be patient in writing, to write truth, true feelings Will write a good composition.

My aunt now I want to tell you that my essay level has improved a lot in the last semester. When I write the text, I always write my heart words on the composition, and I have changed the past to think that more gorgeous statements can be written. The bad thing about writing. Once, I saw a essay in the newspaper. I also asked my father and teacher. After my repeated revisions, this essay won the second prize after mailing. How much I want to share the joy of success with you. what! This time I sent the essay to you with the letter, and I also hope that you will send me a letter as soon as possible. Comment on this essay, there are still some shortcomings.

Aunt, when I grow up, I want to be like you, as a national teacher, to cultivate more talents for the motherland.

wish

Work well and be healthy!

Your niece: Ji Xinyu

December 29, 2011

Wuzhou City, Wuwei City, Liangzhou District, Huiguan Lane, the fourth grade of the fourth grade of the fourth grade: Ji Xinyu

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