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Painting the mountains and embroidering water, savoring life--Appreciation of "Drawing Mountain Water"


The title “Drawing Mountain Embroidery Water” first attracted my attention. This title full of poetry and beauty seems to present us with a landscape painting.

The opening of the article focuses on the scene from Guilin to Yangshuo Road. One of the metaphors is very wonderful. “The water is green, green and green, like the most mellow blue plum wine. It’s also fascinating to look at it.” The author can compare water to mellow wine, which makes people more comfortable in terms of color, texture and taste. And the authors grasp their intoxicating commonalities, which can be described as a wonderful pen.

In order to allow readers to enter the article, the authors used a similar "hypnosis" method to let the readers close their eyes and swim with the author. "Bamboo boat, smooth water, stable, bright, mountain shadow" They all use our imagination and influence our feelings, let us seem to be really immersed, especially the "mountain shadow", to create a sense of guilt, dreams in general.

After the reader has entered the state, and suddenly a osprey has mobilized the tranquil atmosphere, the author describes the process of the osprey fishing in detail, so that the whole environment makes the whole article more life.

After the article goes deep, the author focuses on the mountains and rocks in the Yangshuo area of ​​Guilin. Each mountain has its own story, the father and son rock, the widow bridge, the Wangfu stone, and the daughter-in-law rock. The stories in them have perfect endings, and they also have a miserable ending, but without exception, they all show an important part of Chinese culture - the profoundness of national culture and the traditional virtues of China. Like the father and son, the father and son of Long, for the sake of the people, for the locals do not suffer from famine, Ningxia eventually starved to death in the cave, and did not search for the food for the 10,000-member ship, so strong, justice and simplicity, touched generation after generation, and The reason why the daughter-in-law is written is also reflected in the society in which people lived in the past. The reason why these bleak stories are written is to reflect the social reality at that time, and to warn people that while enjoying a good life, they must not forget the hardships that people have experienced in the past and the hard work and even their lives. I think this article is not only good for depicting the green mountains and clear mountains, but also for some of the spiritual foods it reflects to trigger our thinking, let us have a deeper understanding of this beautiful landscape painting.

The third day of the third class of Kaiming Middle School in Huai'an City: Qiao Qidi

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