a letter to a friend

Pan Junpeng good friend: Hello! do you still remember me? I am your good friend Chen Jinyi. You used to call me "Dan Dan". Haven't seen you for a long time, where are you going? Do you remember? During the summer vacation last year, you often went to my house to play. Every time you come to my house, you are full of curiosity: my room bookcase is full of books that my mother bought for me. There are a lot of toys piled up in the corner of the room, and the wardrobe is full of all kinds of clothes; my home is still There are three TVs and two computers... Once you came to my house to play, my grandmother was cooking, and the table was placed in my opinion as some ordinary dishes, but you asked me who my grandmother had a birthday. I was still laughing at you at the time. I also think about playing at home. One day, go with you, I found out that you have no home at all! You just live under the dark bridge hole, it is actually an underground aisle, four sides of ventilation, there is the same furniture! Your bed is not like a bed at all. If you walk in a tricycle and lay a dilapidated mat, you will be a bed. I really don't know how you sleep! How did you get through winter? That pot, I really don't know how to describe it. I have never seen such a pot before. I used a stone to form a pot rack with an old pot that is black and not autumn. It is very dirty. There are no books in the "home", no toys, let alone a TV computer. You secretly told me that you don't have a mother, and your father is junk. No wonder you are so worn and dirty, because you can change without clothes, no mother can help you wash. I am very sympathetic to you, I went home and found a lot of beautiful clothes and shoes for you. We became good friends, playing together every day: running to the mountains to find frogs, going to the river to go to the rocks, going to run together in the morning, playing badminton in the evening... I miss the summer vacation! But when I started school, I have to go to school. I think you can go to school with me! But since that day, I have never seen you again. Where have you been? Going to school, or moving "home"? I really want to tell you, I hope you can come back to play with me again, I will send you clothes, shoes, books, I want to help you. I hope that you will also go to school. I hope that you will have a stable home. I hope that you can live a happy and happy life and grow up healthily! I wish you happiness! Your good friend: Chen Jinyi 2007.10.21 teacher comment: The words in this composition are full of thoughts about this good friend. Although you and the friend's living environment is very different, but you are not against him. Dislike, but built a deep friendship with him, and you are a very kind and good boy. "Every time you come to my house, you are full of curiosity." "The table is placed in my opinion as some ordinary dishes. But you asked me who my grandmother had a birthday. The author made a suspense here, paving the way for the following narrative. The outstanding feature of this essay is that it is vivid and tortuous. Through the comparison between the "I" family and the good friend "home", the author's sympathy for the good friend is described in the pen. 2008-11-30 22:12:00

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