Childhood

In the spring, I went swimming. When I was studying, I always turned my head in the water. I learned it for nine days and finally learned. May 4th of the summer is my birthday. Mom and Dad bought me Kend chicken. In the evening, my brother and I lived in the grandmother's house. My brother and I went to catch fireflies. In the fall, my brother and I went to the back of the door to pick the fruit. We picked it while eating. In the winter, my brother and I were playing snowballs. There are a lot of snowflakes on the head, and the childhood fun is really interesting! The famous teacher comment: The full text mainly describes the author's childhood fun, swimming from the spring, catching fireflies in the summer, picking the fruits in the fall, playing snow in the winter, the authors have described them one by one, the fly in the ointment It is the author who just listed these interesting things, but did not specify some things in detail, and this part needs improvement. Keep on cheering! 2009-7-17 20:34:00

Childhood

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