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beautiful scenery


We went out for an outing today and went to a mountain to play. There was a small pond with a lot of small shrimps and small fish. They danced cheerfully in the water. There were lotus flowers in the small pond, and they stopped on the rest. The beauty here. I am deeply fascinated! I yelled: "Ah!" 'Mr. Teacher's Comments: You can feel the beauty from your description. You can use a smooth language to describe your age. Produce such a beautiful picture, especially the use of appropriate anthropomorphic techniques to vividly visualize the article. When you write the text, in order to show the scene more clearly, it is necessary to write in order, from the first to see Write it. Finally write your own feelings. 2008-8-25 16:40:00

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