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Today, I am holding a diary and committing a crime: What are you writing today? It’s too dull! There is really nothing to write! I thought about it for a long time and I didn't think about it. I had to ask my mother. Mom said: "There are not many things happening this week. If you see it on campus, you can write everything you hear. You can also write about what happened at home. These are good materials." I said: These are boring! There is no content at all!” Mom said: “It’s not without content, because you didn’t look at them carefully. For example, when cooking, how to pour oil, how to cook.” I suddenly realized that life is not Plain, but I didn't find it! The famous writer Lao She said: "If you observe too little, you will not have a deep impression, and you will not be able to grasp one clearly." Yes, I am not like this? Usually too little observation, no one can write when I write a diary. In fact, life itself is a colorful kaleidoscope, as long as it becomes a thoughtful person, the writing materials will be more and more. Teacher Comments: Little author, since you already know how to write a diary, why not write it? You know what you think now, and write the real diary for everyone to appreciate. But your last paragraph is well written. And you come to that life is not dull, but it is natural to not find this argument. You can also quote Lao She’s words to prove your own arguments. Explain that your writing is still very skillful. However, even if you write a diary, you have to write it in sections. It’s a mess. I hope that you can write a good diary in the future to appreciate it. 2009-5-21 18:36:00

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