go to the museum

This morning, I said to my mother, "Mom. I am going to the museum to see animals." "Okay." Mom readily agreed. I really want to fly away, but now it is only 7:03, and it will not open until 9:00. I waited until I finally waited for 8:50, then I set off. When I got there, I met my good friends: Xu Chengyu and Yao Siwei. We went to collect the money together, I am still getting the discount, but Yao Siwei has already taken it out. The aunt who collected the money said: "10 yuan per person." We all took it out, and the aunt gave the admission. For us, we will not be in a hurry to go in. When I got inside, I saw a rabbit that I had never seen before, and then a giant crocodile. Compared with me, I was smaller than it. The hamster that I like the most, it doesn't like dirty things on the hair. It ate something very quickly, like a mouse, but it ate and fell asleep while eating and eating. After a while, we went home. Teacher's Comments: The author's essay tells the story of the animals and the students watching the animals. "I really want to fly away immediately." "I waited until I finally waited for 8:50." I was eager to see the animals. The mood is well expressed. Our young authors are still too young, so it's not clear when describing things. Why do you want to see animals in museums? What kind of activity is this? These should be accounted for in the composition. "First look at a rabbit that I have never seen before." What does this rabbit look like? It would be nice if the little author could describe it to the reader. 2009-5-25 15:59:00

go to the museum

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