The high-scoring essay

One of the strategies: the high score composition must be the ability to deduct the title of the question is actually the ability to examine the question, the strength of the test ability directly reflects the level of the candidate's composition, therefore, the deduction is often a "normal" and important feature of the high score composition. The language expression reaches a certain level, and with the deduction of the text, often get a higher score. If you don't deduct the question, you are arrogant, you "a line of egrets on the sky", the score you get will make you cry. This year, a high school student in a school took the entrance exam. Her English score was more than 140 points, but the language was only 70 points. In any case, she did not believe in the Chinese language scores. She went to the provincial recruitment office for inspection, and she fainted when she checked: the composition only got 20 Minute. It is very obvious that the candidate's composition must be digressive. The province's review group requires: 20 minutes or less from the essay! At the time of the first prize of a high school in Nanjing, who won the first prize of the Global American Grand Prix, her essay scored only 25 points, which was also due to the deviation from the title.
The buckle has a buckle and a dark buckle, with a surface buckle and a deep buckle. The so-called "clear buckle" is the text that must be reflected in the material in the composition. For example, the title of the joint examination essay in Zhejiang Province must have the words "humanity and development", and these words need to be "multiple appearances" in the text. Many times "reflection", to enhance the impression of the reviewer "the candidate is a deduction." Most of the "deductions" are used for argumentative papers and colloquial styles. The so-called "dark buckle", that is, there is not a large number of "texts expressing expressions in the material" in the composition, but it is expressed in the composition "intention", which is often applied in narrative and literary articles, often at the end. appear. "Surface buckle" refers to the words with "performance", which is shallow, while the "deep buckle" is spiritual, deep, and integrated. The high score composition should be "deeply deducted."
The following article is the beginning of Zhejiang's full composition. This article is to grasp the high scores of the deduction:
"I think that social development, one is bread: the second is the book. Bread, as the name suggests, refers to the basic material conditions. This most basic condition is achieved in the hard years, after how many people struggled to achieve the sweat. At present, we have solved the problem of food and clothing, and we must not ignore the role of books in the pursuit of a higher material life.
The book represents science, represents character, and represents humanistic qualities and values. The importance of science is self-evident. Without science, there is no strong China, no economic development, and humanistic literacy is often overlooked. People do not realize that there are values ​​and humanistic spirits that play an extremely important role in development. The case in which a public cultural and social science literacy in a province is only 7.5% is the most powerful evidence. ”
He used "bread" and "book" to vividly expound the "relationship between humanistic literacy and development", and closely related to the "intentional" textual material in the material, and "open the door", such a deduction should be an example.
The second strategy: high score composition must have their own thoughts, please first read a good test of the joint exam:
When the US whistling missiles shine like a meteor over Afghanistan, many people actually sweated for the "terrorist king" Ben La deng; when Japan suffered a catastrophic disaster - an earthquake, many people silently shouted in their hearts One sentence: "You are unlucky, small Japan!" And when North Korea was being criticized in the world for testing nuclear weapons, the Chinese people posted posts on the Internet "supporting the Korean people!"
Everything has a right and wrong, is it right? Many people do not take the problem itself as a starting point. They voted for support or opposition only because of personal love or disgust. is it right to do so?

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I still remember the night of September 11th. After watching the TV report, I couldn't sleep. So I turned on the computer and wanted to vent the Internet. Open "9·11 User Reviews", I am dumbfounded! "Down with US imperialism!", "Ben La deng is good"... How many slogans of passionate slogans are blowing, which makes me feel overwhelmed. In front of me, I repeated the scene of the collapse of the building countless times; in my ear, the roaring police car, the people’s screams, and the girl’s crying. I can't help but ask: What should we do if a disaster strikes us? Is drinking cola, eating a burger, turning on the computer, and shouting a few words "×××Long live"? Or when you were speechless, just as the gaze on TV was stunned, the old mother who whispered "God, God..." was shrouded in grief.
The candidate is observing with his heart and thinking with words. There is no such thing as a cloud. The principle of his dealings in his heart is a "person", which leads to the conclusion that "there is no intention to interrupt the right and wrong." The joint test composition is the level at which the country is testing your life, the height of your personality, the depth of your thoughts, and the concentration of your feelings. We can speculate that, a few years later, "such a student" has embarked on a leadership position, and he can maintain the truth and pursue the truth as Wen Tianxiang does. If the school can train such students, this is the real quality education. Zhou Dunyi's "Books and Thoughts" said: "Thinking is Rui, Rui is holy." Engels also said: "The most beautiful flower on earth is the spirit of thinking." In fact, people must think when they live, and the composition is the same, you The text is the carrier of your thoughts, there are thoughts, and your articles have weight. Therefore, the entrance examination composition must be a high-ranking person, you must carry out ideological cultivation. Some people say that man is a weed that can think! Many people use this to do the topic, to think, often favored by the reviewers. From this perspective, writing texts often produces thoughts. When we observe and read, we must always nurture our own thoughts, manage our own realm, and let ourselves not look at the eyes. As a candidate, I thought that I should establish the following ideas: green, peaceful thoughts; democracy, freedom, non-violent thoughts; closeness to nature, the idea of ​​unity of things; worrying about the country and the people; the quiet, elegant feelings; closeness The lower layer, the sympathy of the weak, the joy of the people; the Zen, the Zen, the Zen.
When we accumulate ideas, we must work toward the truth and do not move in the opposite direction.
1. Thoughts should not be naive. For the students, the ideological and emotional naivety is not at fault, but if you only stay in the childish, satisfied with the childish, and even fascinated by the childishness, it is impossible to reach the ideal shore, and you can't go to the magnificent ocean and the choppy ocean. If you are naive, you may become a kind of sorrow, a kind of national sorrow. The entrance examination composition is for the country to choose materials. It is necessary to select people with vision and level to go to university for further study. However, some candidates have very naive thoughts. It seems to be a national student. If you don’t see a weighty sentence, the materials cited are all “ I...", all written fairy tale myths. What's more, there is a big love, and it is naked and frightened. Some candidates boldly use the "love letter" as the subject of the joint test composition. The love he writes is nothing more than a "triangular jealous" style. in love.
2. Do not "seek the skin". Some students' thoughts only stay on the surface, and the problem is not eye-catching; some are just emotional and the article lacks strength.
3. Do not "hippie" attitude. The joint entrance examination reflects the will of the state, while the national will focuses on the establishment of the Confucian country. Some students like to sing the opposite tone, and the singer's opposite tone is written in a ridiculous tone, which is not serious. The essay title of a joint exam simulation question is “dignity”. Some candidates use the word “dignity is a little meaning” to make a topic, which makes people fall out of “glasses” and make a big joke. You are joking with the joint test, and the entrance exam will also be You are joking, giving you a sad tear.
4. Intention can not be reactionary. There is no political reaction in the joint test composition, but the low level of the realm, the vulgarity of the thoughts, there are many people, such as singing hymns for Hitler, screaming for terrorists, defending thieves, making fun of forbidding fruit, applauding for trying drugs. ,and many more. These ideas must not only be avoided, but also avoided. The so-called dark avoidance, that is, the intention can not be implicitly reflected.
Strategy 3: High score composition must have a unique angle
The 800 words are stipulated. For the candidates, it is the palm of the "Russian Buddha". The 12-year "skills" must be displayed on this "palm", so that the scoring person's "eyes" can see you. The level comes. The "area" is limited. How to make it "high-yield" depends on the "Kung Fu" of the candidate. There are many "Kung Fu", and the angle is one of them. I remember when I was a child, I went to the mountains to cut wood. The elders taught us to pay attention to the angle of the knife. It was so quick and easy to save. It was not very good at the time. It’s really important to think about it now. Only by finding a proper angle can you get twice the result with half the effort. The composition is also the same, the angle is different, the style of the composition is different, the temperament is different, and the scores are different.
So what are the angles that are good?
1. The angle of life. When the article was written about life, it was gone on Gao Ge. Linking your material to life will be unique. A candidate used the "list of life" to make a perfect score around the big fuss. When Mr. Yu Qiuyu talked about life and writing, he said that many middle school students only noticed good articles and did not notice the inner feelings of life. Some students will learn a writing method, a language structure organization, although very smart, but this is not the backbone of life. Yu Qiuyu once wrote a comment on a work: ingenuity, but I can't feel the temperature of youth in your body. There is no temperature, just ingenuity, structure to structure, like a game, that is a pity. Writing articles must start from life, and good articles are real life expressions. He also eloquently tells us that writing is the mutual warmth between human life and life, not a kind of existence between the odd structure. On the question of effective expression and the true conveyance of the meaning of life, we should not put the cart before the horse. When it is young, it will take decades to get out of the way. Some people have not come out for a lifetime.
2. Masterpiece perspective. Therefore, if you can become a famous book, you must have a gold content. I read the famous classics and used famous works. In a limited time and in the "area", I used the "condiments" of the famous works to write the chapter of life, and the information of the article was much more. Every year, there are high scores in the use of famous works. The full score of Hubei candidates is evidence.
Baodi Mingsong, a candidate from Hubei Province, took a look at the Grand View Garden at sunrise and found out that the world has a lot of criticisms for me. I am really awkward!
People prefer the young Lin sister who is weak and can't help but mention that I bite my teeth one by one, some of them are hypocritical, some mean that I am greedy for fame and fortune, and some blame me for destroying the good feelings of others... This is because they look with colored glasses. For my sake.
I admit that compared with my sister Lin, it is indeed a little sleek, but it is not my fault. I lived with my mother and my brother in Jia, my mother was gentle, my brother was a lawless demon king, and later married a fierce scorpion. If I don't pay attention, everything is careful, how can I make my mother and Can I survive in such a whirlpool? But some people are jealous of me and buy people's hearts. Do I care that everyone is wrong? I just hope that my mother and myself can live in peace with everyone around me.
Someone has figured out that "good winds rely on force, send me to Qingyun" and say that I am thinking of famous and rich. This is another big prejudice against me. Have you forgotten that I was in Beijing for the drafting of women? As a singer who was educated from the urinary "three from four virtues", when I faced an opportunity to change my destiny, couldn't I have some embarrassment and hope for my future? Moreover, I also expressed my grief over this dark world in the crab poems, which made the sisters scream, this is my poetry, why do people ignore it?

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The pre-existing wood and stone alliance is indeed touching, but the golden jade is not planned by me. I am also pursuing my own love! When Baoyu beat, did I really show it? But Lin’s red and swollen eyes won everyone’s sympathy, and people turned a blind eye to me. The package adjustment gave me a snoring sound, but who knows that when I heard the sound of Baoyu's "Lin sister", my heart was also very painful? I can't get the love I'm pursuing, and I still bear the nickname of destroying other people's feelings. Who has said a fair word for me?
The reason why people have a lot of prejudice against me is because they all look at me with the feeling that they like Lin’s sister and hate me. Look at my words and deeds, look at my words... In fact, even Lin’s sister can use I look at me with a fair look. I regret that I misunderstood me before. Why can't others be? I hope that the world will not look at people with the closeness of feelings, so that the little girl can get the snow!
Why is this article high score? To put it bluntly, it is to use the name of the material, to hold the material, and add a little thought of his own to succeed. If it is detailed, I think there are several reasons:
1 angle is novel. The cut-in angle is an important highlight of the joint test composition. How to cut in? How to cut in to meet the requirements of the US language, it is very particular, there are many articles to do. This article reappears with Xue Baozhen's ghost, talks about the relationship between emotion and cognition, is creative, and scores high points in novelty.
2 With the name of the work material, the weight is heavy. Masterpieces are often praised by people for their profound knowledge and profound thoughts. You use their characters to conceive and write, and their style and weight are absolutely different.