If I am a grass

If I am a grass, I will try to sprout, break the hard shell, take out the green shoots and give birth to the long roots, and suck the milk given by the mother of the earth. I grow up slowly.....Spring I took out the green shoots, played with each other, played with each other, and thrived quickly. I absorbed the warmth brought by the spring breeze girl and absorbed the nutrition that my mother gave me. Every morning, I was bathed in sunshine and dew. I was dancing under the guidance of the spring breeze. In the summer, I am already a strong grass of adulthood. I have a hard time with my companions. The summer sun is very strong, baking us. Some of my companions are dying, their bodies are yellow, and some have already died. The whole body withered, only me and a few of my companions survived, so that we were fortunate to come to God to hear our embarrassment, then it was a downpour, and the raindrops of the beans fell and moistened us. The body moisturizes the earth and makes us full of vitality. In the fall, I am close to the edge of death. I used the last drop of nutrition to give me the grass seeds, which is my descendants. They are out of my body. They are drifting in the wind, traveling, looking for their own place, I The mission is complete. In the winter, I have been sleeping and underground, my body has become nutritious, and my next generation is better to survive. The teacher commented: The composition wrote the life of the grass in the order of time, although it was imagined, but it was very vivid. It is very real, let the reader feel a strong, courageous grass. There are many metaphors and anthropomorphic sentences, which are very appropriate, like: "If I am a grass, I will try to sprout, break the hard shell, and take out the green shoots to give birth to long roots. "The milk that I gave" "I took out the green sprouts, played with each other, played with each other, and thrived rapidly." "My companions are already dying, their bodies are yellow, some have already lost their lives, and their bodies are withered." These sentences are vividly described, giving the grass a personality and spirit. "I absorbed the warmth brought by the spring breeze girl and absorbed the nutrition that my mother gave me." I changed it to "I enjoy the warmth brought by the spring breeze girl and absorb the nutrition that my mother gave me." "Every morning, I am bathed in the sun." , dew, I am dancing under the guidance of the spring breeze" changed to "Every morning, I am bathed in sunshine, dew, and danced under the touch of the spring breeze" "The summer sun is very strong, baking us, I Some of their companions have been dying, their bodies are yellow, some have already lost their lives, and their bodies have withered. Only me and several of my companions have survived. "Change to "the summer sun is very strong, baking us. My companion Some of them have been dying, their bodies are yellow, some have already lost their lives, and their bodies have withered. Only me and several of my companions have survived." After a sentence, you must use a full stop. 2009-9-27 20:56:00

If I am a grass

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