Beautiful little park
Not far from my residence, there is a small park, saying that it is small, and I will go from one head to the other for more than a minute.
Going to school every morning, if the time is still early, I can turn a corner and look here. If the time is tight, I will pass the straight road in front of the door. Looking out at the end of the alley, you can clearly see the gates of the park and the green plants on the fence.
There is a small pavilion in the small park. There is a beam on all four sides. It is more than two feet high from the ground. The tourists will sit on the stool. Sometimes three or two people, sometimes a dozen or so people, chat and tell jokes, and our children play games in a central open space. All the surrounding walls are planted with flowers and trees that are not well-known, some with light yellow flowers, and some with leaves that are as big as a fan. In this season, the magnolia tree is just blooming, rich. The floral fragrance can really fascinate people.
Most of the children who came to the park to play were children who had not yet learned to walk. With the help of their father or mother, they began to observe the world carefully and observe every plant in the small park. Some children may just learn to walk, the family brought a walker, let the child sit in the middle of the car, use his feet on the ground, and go out, so that children and adults laugh. . Whenever I see this scene, my mood is as sweet as eating honey! How happy it is to be under the care of my father and mother!
I love this little park and love the kids who grew up in this park!
The fourth grade of the Galaxy: Luo Yiqi
Comments: "There is no lack of beauty in life, but lack of discovery." An ordinary small park has no bright spots in the eyes of many people. The author feels that it is fun and interesting. The reason is that the author has a pair of good at discovering. The eyes and a mind that is good at feelings, the author's life will be rich and colorful. The description of the third paragraph is very exciting. From the pavilion, the beam, the tourists, the vegetation to the floral fragrance, it gives the reader a strong sense of the picture and also enjoys the beauty. The downside is that the end is a bit rushed. In addition, "love the kids who grew up in this park!" It has nothing to do with the theme, you can delete it.
Comments Teacher: Teacher Tao Liulin
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