Evening lawn

One evening, I, Xiaoling and Xiaomei came together to a lawn. I saw many people on the lawn, there are old people and children; some old people are playing Tai Chi, some old people are practicing swords; some children are lying on the lawn, some children are hiding and hiding...

In the breeze, we lie on the lawn and chat, sometimes giving a laugh, and we enjoy the lawn in the autumn evening! I picked a small grass and chewed it in my mouth, feeling a little faint grassy smell. At this time, Xiaoling said to me and Xiaomei: "Tomorrow is the Mid-Autumn Festival, and our three families come here to enjoy the moon. Are you saying good?" We promised. Xiaoling said; "What do you want to bring to enjoy the moon?" Xiaomei said: "With moon cakes, lanterns, fruits, and drinks." We are discussing, Xiaoli suddenly ran over and asked: "Can I attend your party tomorrow night?" Xiaoling and Xiaomei climbed up and patted in unison and replied: "Welcome welcome, warm welcome!" The three rushed together and attracted the attention of many people on the lawn.

About 50 meters away from us, a few lovely sparrows are smugly playing. I really want to catch a sparrow to play enough. I suggest Xiaoling and Xiaomei to round up them. However, without waiting for us to get close to them, the clever sparrows flew away, leaving us with only a bunch of silver bell-like sparrows...

Comment: The author makes full use of the "five features" to write the lawn in the evening, and writes down what he saw, heard, tasted, felt, and even thought of. At the same time, the language and movements of the characters are also a good expression of a child's innocence.

Second grade of the second class of Xiapu National Primary School, Huizhou, Guangdong: Li Baoyi