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Cousin, your face is fat and round, and the two big eyes are round and bright, so cute! However, your love of hitting people is very annoying. I still remember that time, we came to your house to play. Just entering the gate was shocked by your voice, very harsh, not good for the ears. After that, we talked and laughed together, very happy. Xiao Jing, who is sitting next to you, accidentally hit you, and you will hit someone. When I saw it, I said a few words to you. You even came to beat me. I really didn’t want to fight. After that time, my opinion on you has completely changed. From the lovely and lively little boy to the love of bullying the weak. Cousin, I teach you a way: When you want to lose your temper next time, take a deep breath and think about it or not. It will be successful. If the control is not your own, then you will lose more intimate friends, more people who care about and care for you, everyone will stay away from you, you will feel lonely. I hope you can give it a try. When I was doing my homework today, I saw a sentence like this: It’s better than doing it. I hope you accept my method. Next time you want to see the new you, don't let me down! Teacher's Comments: Although the little cousin is very cute, he has the bad habit of loving people and screaming. Seeing that the little cousin was rude and ignorant, "I" was disappointed and sad for the little cousin, because such behavior would cause the little cousin to lose a lot of friends who care about himself. The little author hopes that the little cousin can recognize Make mistakes in your own behavior and correct them as soon as possible. The emotions in the composition are very sincere, the attitude is very sincere, and the center of the composition is more profound. How old is the little cousin now? Are you going to school now? What is his performance at school? Have you ever thought about what caused the cousin to be rude and capricious? If you can find out the reason for the cousin's waywardness, it may be more conducive to help the cousin to correct bad habits. Is the title of the composition an error when uploading? The title of the composition is not smooth, I hope the little author corrects it. 2009-4-28 15:45:00

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