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"Super Mayor" I admire you


"Naughty Horse Jumping" is my favorite book. There are 16 books in this set, and each one is very funny. When I didn't watch it, I only thought that the horse was funny, mischievous and always funny. However, after reading "Super Mayor", I began to admire Ma Xiaobo. The first thing I admire is that he is very independent and does not rely on his parents. Their city plays the "simulated city" game, and chooses a "super mayor" from among the children in the city. Other children go to sign up, all of them are accompanied by mom and dad or the whole family. Only Ma Xiaoyue is his own. He said: "It’s my campaign, it’s not their campaign. Why are they coming?” Later, when he took the stage, he also prepared his own speech, unlike other people, who wrote it. If you change to me, I am afraid I have to be with my parents. The second is that he is very bold and does not panic when he encounters things. Even the principal and the reporter said that he had good psychological quality. His competitors are "small prodigies", "big captains", "idiom kings" or something, only he is nothing. His classmate Ding Wentao said that compared with others, it is simply an ant and an elephant confrontation. The teacher also has no confidence in him and wants to ask him to give up. But he was not nervous at all, and he easily participated in the competition. At the time of the talent show, Ma Xiaoyue’s trousers fell and everyone laughed, but he was not at all guilty. He lifted his pants and continued to perform. I can't do this, if I have, I have already cried my nose! Ma Xiaotiao, you are a real mayor, I admire you! Teacher's Comments: The title of this essay by the author is very good. It can capture the reader's attention and attract readers' interest in reading. The small author described in detail the two reasons why "I" admire Ma Xiaoyue: First, Ma Xiaoyue's self-reliance ability, preparing himself, and going to the election campaign himself, embodies the true strength of being a "super mayor"; It’s the boldness of the horse, the calmness, and the panic. This is the quality that many children lack now. The language of the composition is smooth and fluent, the content of the composition is well-organized, and the language expression ability of the small author is very good. 2009-4-8 11:09:00

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