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Cherish your friendship very much

You are back, why don't you talk to me, I sent you a newsletter, didn't you say it? I know how you have been, how are you? Is it changed? Is it not possible? You are not? Changed, I used to send you a newsletter, you will return it to me, now you have not returned it to me, you said: "Are you changed? Is the world changing me and you, have you forgotten me, or Remember me, if you remember me, why don't you send me a newsletter? I remember you, talking and laughing with you, meeting you for the first time, very embarrassed, don't know what to say, when you go, I have nothing to give you, only send a blessing to you, I wish you a happy summer! I hope that you will be happy every day! Now I am the same, if you forget me, I will let you know me, even if I have cherished your friendship with you. I’m a teacher’s comment: This essay, the little author uses a self-reported way to talk about the feelings of “you.” The little author tells the questions in his heart and tells the story. My own mourning and concern for "you", and then recalled with "you" Happy and happy together, from the words of the young author, we can feel that the small author really cherishes the friendship between you and "you", and indeed has a true feeling for "you". But the little author, friend did not return information in time. It may also be that you have not received it. You can call and ask, don't bother with such a trifle. If this person also cherishes friendship like you, you will not forget you. If this person does not cherish your affection for him, I forgot this kind of indifferent person. "Don't you say that?" It should be "Don't you receive it?". "Is it changed?" and "You have changed", these two feelings are a bit contradictory, delete "You have changed." "You said: 'Have you changed?" This sentence is the question of the little author himself about "you". The double quotes in the original text should be deleted. "You" should be added with a question mark. , become "you?" ". 2009-11-24 8:23:00

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