Drawing

I finished my homework on Saturday, I have nothing to do, I want to do something good? Just draw a little white rabbit! I thought while painting, after a while, I finished painting. I took it to my mother. When my mother looked at it, I laughed. I felt very strange. I thought: Why did mom laugh? I said to my mother, "Mom, why are you laughing? Is it hard to see?" Mom said to me; "Child, you see that you painted the rabbit's legs as elephant legs." I feel ashamed. I took it to my father again. After my father saw it, I laughed. I said to my father. "Why are you like Mom, are you making a mistake?" Dad said; "Child, look at the rabbit." The tail, what did you find?" I saw, suddenly realized that I had drawn the rabbit's tail too long, and the rabbit's tail should be short. I shyly returned to my room. According to the words of Mom and Dad, I repainted a little white rabbit. Dad and Mom said after reading it; "I have made progress this time, keep working hard!" I jumped up happily.

Third grade: 嘻嘻哈哈