autumn rain

One morning, I went to the balcony to see the plants. Suddenly, a cool breeze came, and my arm suddenly felt a little cool. I look at the sky in the distance, gray. There are also a few red dragonfly flying low around the trunk. I think: It will rain soon.

Sure enough, I didn’t expect it, and it took a while to get drizzle. The rain is long and thin, like a string of strings, gently falling on the earth, on the green trees, on the house... playing a wonderful piece of music. If you don't listen carefully, you can't feel its beauty.

When the autumn rain falls on the earth, its movements are elegant. It rarely splashes water. When it falls on the leaves, its movements are gentle, like touching the childish face. It also strokes the small flowers and grass, stroking all things in nature.

Pedestrians on the road are covered in colorful raincoats, holding a variety of umbrellas, looking upstairs, like a colorful little moving, beautiful.

I also went downstairs with an umbrella. The hand reached out of the umbrella, and the autumn rain fell on the hand, very comfortable, as if it was tickle. I simply took the umbrella and walked in the rain. Rain kissed my face affectionately and slowly sprinkled on my hair. I know that my hair must have been covered with crystal water drops.

In the afternoon, the rain stopped. The ground is wet, and it is washed away by rain. The leaves seemed to be greener, and the flowers and plants were full of water and played a twelve-point spirit. The air has become fresher and sweeter. But the sky is still gray, as if the cloud girl has not cried enough.

After the autumn rain, our environment has become even better. I love this lovely autumn rain, what about you?

Fourth grade: Wang Wei

Comments: This is an article to wash away the soul. The author expresses his feelings in the scene, blends the scenes, has beautiful language and exquisite emotions. It not only describes the autumn rain scenery just right, but also expresses the feelings of autumn rain, which is really touching.

In addition, the design of the text of this article also reflects the careful design of the small author, from "thinking rain" to "seeing the rain" to "leaching rain", interlocking, emotional context is natural and sincere. The article uses rhetoric, anthropomorphic and other rhetorical techniques in many places, and the image is vivid, bringing readers to the atmosphere of autumn rain.

Review Teacher: Hao Zhu Teacher