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Reading "My Long Fruits"


I have learned a lot from the text "My Longevity Fruit".

The article writes about the benefits of reading through two things. When writing a text, she is not as monotonous as others, but uses her own eyes to observe life and write her life with her own feelings. By writing "Autumn Comes", the author has realized a truth in his essay: The composition must be conceived with ingenuity, and there must be a distinctive "savory taste" when writing. The author realized a truth by writing an article about "An Unpleasant Past Events": The composition must be true and sentimental, and the composition practice is inseparable from reference and imitation. These two reasons have helped me a lot in writing.

I used to be afraid of writing classes, because I don’t know where to write, I don’t use my own eyes to observe life, I use my own feelings to write my life, I write the composition, the language is empty, boring, almost every essay. Both have to be "C". Whenever there is a essay, my heart beats and I worry about the teacher's criticism. When I saw the red semi-circle "C" in my composition, I was ashamed to bury my head in my chest, worried that my classmates would look down on me. Therefore, I am not interested in writing. By studying "My Long Fruits," I tried to write the text according to the author's two reasons in writing.

I remember once, the title of the composition was "Beautiful Big Cock." I went home to observe the shape and living habits of the big cock. Write down the observations in a certain order. Describe the shape of the big cock. I first grasp the feathers, crowns, mouths, eyes, claws, etc. of the big cock, and then describe it in vivid language. I describe the shape of the big cock like this: my family's big cock has colorful feathers, covering the whole body, like wearing a gorgeous coat. The cock is red, like a big helmet in red. It also has a pointed mouth. The chicken scratched the sharp, sharp knife, as if everything could be grasped. The long tail of the chicken, the upturned, is really like a mighty "general"! This essay teacher gave me "A". I also read this essay as a essay to the students, and the students cast an envious look at me. I am very happy. At this moment, I deeply realized: "Reading a million volumes, writing a pen like a god" is sincere.

The ancients said: "Walking thousands of miles, reading thousands of books" classmates, let us be friends with books, let the book navigate for us. Let us join hands to create a scholarly campus and share the fun of reading!

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