Delicious fries

This morning, my grandmother brought me a bag of French fries from the supermarket. The white trapezoidal paper package is particularly clean. I picked up the box and carefully licked it and found it to be spicy and chicken-flavored. Wow, this must be delicious! Suddenly, my mouth seemed to overflow a lot of saliva. I can't wait to open the box. I thought I could eat it directly. I didn't expect a silver "clothing" inside. Although, I am very anxious, but I patiently untied the "zipper" of the inner layer. Haha, a long, naked fries are exposed to my eyes. Suddenly, a burst of fragrant smell came. I like it so much, I quickly picked up the fries and kissed me. I can't wait any longer. I quickly squeezed the ketchup into a small dish. Red ketchup can be tempting! I gently squeezed out a fries and licked the ketchup and sent it to my mouth. The sweet and sour taste fills my mouth. I bite the crispy, fragrant, and delicious. Then, I took three or four and licked the ketchup into my mouth. My tongue is so satisfying! So fast, there are only a few left. I really regret that I just ate too fast. This time I slowly eat, I lick a bite of ketchup, then lick and bite a small bite until the fries are all wiped out in my mouth. Grandma laughs, I am a little cat! Haha, today's fries are delicious!

Mom's testimony: I am a group of 50 Ningbo sons. The child is going to the second grade in September. The verbal ability is OK, but when writing the text, it will become poor, and it will be off topic, writing an essay for a long time. . In July of this year, I was fortunate to join the YY voice, while seriously studying the teacher's "How much is the composition", while listening to the YY voice network class. The process of coaching children in these weeks is also a process of learning to write, which is very interesting.

Children like to eat KFC's fries, but when they think of fried foods, they don't let their children eat. This day the child's grandmother opened the back door for him, and the child was fortunate enough to eat the French fries. Since the child has a soft spot for the French fries, I will let the children write down the process and feeling of eating French fries. I guided the children to observe the characteristics of the fries packaging: color, shape, etc.; the mood when seeing the French fries; the appearance of the French fries, color, fragrance. In the process of eating French fries, the child recalled that he first ate one by one, then three or four together to eat, and waited to eat when he was finished. I think the child is too interesting. This way of eating is exposing his favorite fries. I encourage children to eat this kind of thing is quite real, let's write it down truthfully. It may be that the child likes this fries too much. It seems to be chewing when writing. The article is very immature, but I feel very real. Let's learn together and observe the bits and pieces of life together. With the good methods taught by the teacher, the composition will definitely improve.

First grade: Chen Weixian