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I love fairy tales


There is something called Eternal, the stars in the mountains, the creeks in the mountains, and the beautiful fairy tales in my hands. Every minute, I appreciate its exciting story. I love you. The fairy tale teacher comment: The article expresses in the form of poetry. The theme of "I love fairy tales", in general, has a clear theme and clear meaning. Need to be reminded: poetry itself is very demanding, not only neat, profound meaning, but also rhythm of poetry, this article is still some distance from these requirements, the full text statement is not neat enough, written more plain, "mountain These beautiful fairy tales in Xiaoxi and my hands are not ideal enough. I hope that the small authors will continue to work harder, write more and practice more, come on! 2009-9-30 20:32:00

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