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The third grade composition class of Dushu Education in Zhengzhou City, Henan Province

One day, the chalk mother came out to play with her children, and I don’t know why, the children quarreled. I saw that the white chalk was covered in soil, and the nose and face were swollen. It was so terrible that I couldn’t stop it, and I kept crying. It seemed that I was greatly wronged.

Chalk Mom came to the children and asked: "What happened?" White chalk said: They all attacked me, and some of them shot me a lot... I haven’t waited for the white chalk to finish, and the red chalk grabbed it: Who makes you self-righteous, no one in the eyes, who does not know that you are unlucky, if you get rid of you, you will be unlucky, the broom will be reincarnation, hehe!" Pink chalk also said: "The fight, always think that you are terrific, but also devalue others. Monotonous still always looks down on others, who!" Blue chalk also said: "You said that you can do it yourself, but it is mad, let us give you a back, want to step on our shoulders to climb up, it is shameless. I don't know that I am only suitable for staying on the wall!" Everyone, I said to him, I was crying even more sadly. At this time, the chalk mother probably heard it is awkward, picking up them and painting them on the ground, and a beautiful rainbow appeared in front of them.

At this time, they all bowed their heads and thought: We are wrong. Everyone has the usefulness of everyone. We can't just see our own strengths and we can't see our own shortcomings. We should see the advantages of others. So take advantage of the length. Thinking of this, the children came hand in hand to the mother and said to her mother: "We are wrong!" After they finished playing happily, the chalk mother looked at them and showed a happy smile on his face.

Third grade: Yue Zidong

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