Little white rabbit crossing the river

One day, the little white rabbit was grazing by the river, and suddenly heard a rumbling sound. She looked up and saw, the sky was rolling and it was going to rain. Have to go home quickly, or it will rain. Her home is across the river. When she wants to go home, she will cross the river, but the boat that sent her has been driven away. How to do? The little white rabbit is in a hurry.

At this moment, the white goose playing in the river swam over. The little white rabbit shouted: "Big white goose sister, can you send me a river to go home?" The white goose said: "Yes, you can ride on my back."

The big white goose squatted in the middle of the river with the little white rabbit, and a wave of waves came over, and the white goose swayed. The little white rabbit said: "The big white goose sister, I am so scared, I will drown when I fall into the water." The big white goose comforted the little white rabbit and said: "You hold my long neck and will not fall into the water. You close your eyes and it will pass in a moment."

"Come on!" Hearing the big white goose sister shouted, the little white rabbit opened his eyes and jumped to the river bank. "Great White Goose Sister, thank you!" Dabai Goose said: "No thanks." Turned around and wandered away.

The little white rabbit waved goodbye to the big white goose and then returned home. As soon as I entered the door, the heavy rain broke down. The little white rabbit looked at the opposite side of the fascinating river and said with gratitude: "Fortunately, the big white goose sister sent me over the river in time, otherwise I would pour it into a 'falling rabbit'."

The second grade of Meishan Teachers' Primary School in Sichuan Province: Yan Yifei

Brief comment:

The story of the study is complete, with three parts: cause, process and result. This part of the "passing" details the three plots of seeking help, crossing the river and going ashore. The regulations are clear and focused. The article mentioned earlier that "it is going to rain soon", and later said that "the heavy rain will squat up" before and after, so that the structure of the article is more rigorous, and the center is highlighted.

Instructor: Liu Ying