[Write a composition] This is me

I stood next to the mirror, and there was a man who appeared: a white goose egg face, a faint flash of eyebrows, and a small mouth, and a "horse tail" behind it. This person is me.

This year, the "old age" is in his early 10s - 11 years old. What, you said that I am a little exaggerated? Then you are wrong. I am already "old" compared to those who are small! My personality is: big, lively, witty. The advantage is: the brain turns fast [may have been drinking diesel when I was a child]. The downside is: love forgetting things, sloppy, not strong will... Ah! It’s broken, I haven’t said my name for a long time! You won't blame me? My last name is very difficult to read. It is a small BABY of female and Zhao. I am reading Yao. I am the name of two words, called Jieru. How about? The name is not bad! This name also contains a family's love for me!

I remember once, the teacher arranged the lesson of "The Landscape of Guilin". I think: Since it is the first lesson, I should have a good start, and I will get up at 5 o'clock tomorrow! Thinking of this, I set a bell of 5 o'clock. The next day, although the bell was hit, I was lying on the bed and I didn't move until 7 o'clock. At that time, I hated myself for not having the will, but on the third day, I was still in bed like yesterday. Oh... there is no way!

Broken, my fried cabbage is gone, talk to another day, goodbye! ! !

Comments:

1. The content of this article is really rich. The first author describes the characteristics of the audience first, then defines his age, personality, strengths and weaknesses, and describes his name in detail. The article further confirms the shortcomings of his own will by the case. The unique ending of the article is both easy and natural, and let us know that she loves the side of labor.

2. The content of the article is rich and colorful, but it is not a simple tiling, but a well-organized, dominant, detailed, flexible and ingenious transition.

3. Humorous and humorous language, coupled with a conversational description, presents a cheerful and flexible girl to us. Although some will not be firm, it is still very cute.