My mentor and friend

"It’s hard to write, it’s difficult to write, and I’m upset when I mention the composition.” This is my own in the fourth grade. This poem reflects the situation when I was not writing. At the time, my writings always couldn't be written with any good materials. They were always patchwork and couldn't write any good sentences. Later, under the guidance of the teacher, my composition has improved, but it is not very good. Later, I learned to go online, and I got to know you - the primary school online essay, you have greatly improved my composition.

Pupils online composition, you are really my mentor and friend! I have learned a lot in your stomach. In the past, my composition was not good, but I always felt that my composition was very good. There are no other compositions in the world that can be compared with mine. However, when I met you - the primary school online essay, I realized my deficiencies, you let me know that "there are days outside, people outside." The first time I came in, the first essay I saw was Ning Xin's composition, "My distance from the elephant." After reading it, I realized that compared with Ning Xin, my composition is so small, and her is so great. Then, I read a lot of articles in your stomach, and their articles are also very exciting. When I saw their article, I couldn't help but lower my unspeakable head. Just like a poem written by Yushu Linfeng, "I am not a genius": When you are proud of being a genius, can you look down on the ignorant others.

This sentence made me deeply touched. I thought that I thought I was invincible in my composition, but here I saw my own shortcomings.

Pupils online essays, you are the source of my creation, a treasure house of my knowledge, here I not only saw my own shortcomings, but also learned the writing skills. Guided by your writing skills, I walked into the paradise of composition. You are the source of my inspiration. Only when I face you can I write a good composition.

Pupils' online essays are really good teachers and friends! With your help, your guidance, I finally walked into the paradise of composition, and finally I know that there are days outside the sky, people outside.