Fairy tale 2 annoying thing (2)

Then the last one said, the annoying thing about you is that on the last Friday, the rabbit teacher arranged an assignment, that is: to do a greeting card about flowers. At this time, I stayed a bit: I usually write some essays, diaries. Do some math problems, what you do, you will do it. But like these hand-made paintings, I am not very good at it. So he started her best temper.... Teacher's comment: This article is written in a short time. Then I introduced the annoying thing about 喵喵, that is, the rabbit teacher asked for a flower. Greeting cards, this is not a slap in the face, so I started to temper again. Generally speaking, the article is still relatively fluent, but it is relatively dull and lacks vividness. You can add a description of your expressions, movements, etc. to make the article more vivid. The article's narrative of this annoying thing is not over yet, you can continue to write it down, as an essay, complete the matter. 2009-2-12 23:25:00

Fairy tale 2 annoying thing (2)

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