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Pony wish


The running of the pony family is over, and the little horse Tony wins the championship, and the pony and mother are very happy.

Mom said to Tony: "Baby, today you make your mother very happy, what are your wishes, mother can help you."

“Really?” Tony asked.

"Absolutely true!" Mom said with her chest.

"Mom, I am so tired now, let me sleep and let me know."

"Okay, mom is waiting for you."

In his sleep, Pony dreams that there is a time summoning clock in his home. Every time the needle, minute hand, and second hand are coincident, a universe tunnel can emerge, which can reach anywhere in the universe. The pony also dreamed that he had a pair of "gravity thighs", and he could stand firmly in the local area no matter where he was. The pony is very happy in his dreams.

"Ha" pony woke up with a yawn. He said to his mother: "Mom, I think about these two wishes. I want to have a time summoner and want to have a pair of 'gravity thighs' that will keep me steady. Stand firmly anywhere."

"I thought you would want to eat delicious or beautiful clothes. I didn't expect your wish to be bizarre. Do you really want these two things?" Mom asked.

"Yes, I really want it, and you promised me."

"That, well, you close your eyes and you can make your dreams come true in a minute!"

The little pony closed his eyes. When he opened his eyes, the "time summoner" and "gravity thigh" that he longed for were all realized, but the mother was a lot older and looked like an old one. Many years old.

The pony cried anxiously. "Mom, Mom, what's wrong with you?" "Child," my mother said breathlessly. "A few years ago, a god gave me two spells that could fulfill two surreal wishes. But every time I realize a wish, I will age for five years."

"No, Mom, I don't want this anymore. As long as my mother is healthy, I want my mother to behave as usual." The pony said that he broke the time summoner. His tears fell on his mother's face and his mother changed. Back to the previous appearance, the pony's gravity thigh also disappeared. He was still a normal pony, but he and his mother were very happy. The mother and the child were hugged with tears in their eyes...

Comments: The little author tells a touching and meaningful story through his vivid language. In fact, we can get a lot of things through our own efforts in life, but the health and happiness of family members can't be bought by money. Through this beautiful fairy tale, the little author expresses his love for his mother. The small author's language description is vivid and meticulous, and the emotions are sincere and full of affection.

Comments Teacher: Teacher Chen Kailun

Third grade: Zhao Junyi

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