National Day

Today is the 11th National Day and it is a happy holiday. Early in the morning, my father and I prepared things to go out. Beautiful scenery along the way, beautiful flowers on both sides of the street, bright and fragrant, people's faces filled with the joy of the holiday. The salute rushed to the open, the firecrackers creaked, and people beat the drums and twisted the songs, a lively scene. For almost half an hour, we arrived at the destination - Shihao Communication City. Going into the gate, looking into the distance, ah, there are so many people here! People are crowded with people, and the communication city is surrounded by water. My father and I wandered around the cell phone counter to see if there was a good mobile phone. There are more varieties of mobile phones here: Motorola, Sony Ericsson, Nokia, and Birds... We are so confused that we don’t know what kind of mobile phone to choose. Those mobile phone salesmen are constantly recommending various mobile phones to us. We are all blind and can't see our eyes. Look at other people, some of them are carefully observing and asking about the performance and quality of the mobile phone, some are hesitating, thinking about whether or not to buy this mobile phone, and some have already saved money to buy the mobile phone in the middle, take it I don’t want to let go of my mouth, and I keep talking about what I’m doing, as if I’m complimenting my mobile phone’s cheap price! Dad thought for a while and took me to the promotion counter. I saw a Motorola W181 mobile phone. The salesman tried to sell the mobile phone. It praised it as a good mobile phone with good performance and good quality. And the price is also cheap, the original price of 399 yuan is now priced at 299 yuan, a total of 100 yuan less. Dad was a bit tempted. At this time, the salesman pointed to a mobile phone of the same price and a camera. I thought: This phone can still take pictures, certainly better than the previous one. However, after repeated considerations, Dad finally decided to use the W181, not the phone I said. He said: "Don't look at the appearance, you have to consider it in many ways. For example, like the W205 mobile phone, it can take pictures, but it has no data lines, can't output photos, what is the use? So we have to choose one. The performance is superior, the quality is safe, reliable, economical and practical. "I seem to understand the nod and nodded, and walked out of the hall with my father. In the National Day, I not only experienced happiness, but also learned a lot of knowledge. I am here to wish our great motherland a happy birthday and wish China prosperity. Teacher's Comments: This is a very strong article of life. The article uses the general structure of the total score to describe the things that we experienced on the National Day, that is, the little author accompanied his father to buy a mobile phone. First of all, the small author portrayed the scenes on the street during the National Day, using simple and accurate words, and then made a detailed sketch of the pictures of Shihao Communication City selling mobile phones, and also made people's expressions of buying mobile phones very psychologically portrayed. Expressive, the process of buying mobile phones for myself and Dad has also been faithfully portrayed, and also tells us through the words of Dad how to buy good and cheap goods, life is very strong, and can be said that readers are up! "Other people" was changed to "other people." 2010-1-21 1:40:00

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