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three Bears


Tuesday, September 18, 2019, sunny

Today, I read a story called "Three Bears." I thought it was just a story of three bears, but there is also a mysterious figure. Let's see what is the relationship with the bear?

Once upon a time, there were three embarrassing bears living in a large forest. On this day, a little girl lost her way in the forest and walked into the "bear house." She was tired and hungry, drank the bear porridge, sat down the bear chair, and slept in the bear bed. It seems as comfortable in my own home. At this time, the three bears are back. At a glance they found someone coming. The bear father shouted loudly, and the mother of the bear yelled with a slightly smaller voice, and the bear doll screamed screaming. The bear doll found a little girl on the bed. It is so angry that it wants to bite the little girl. At this time, the little girl woke up and she fled quickly.

This story is very interesting, just like watching a cartoon. It seems that I can hear the bear's cry at any time, as if I have entered the fairy tale kingdom.

It is too rude to move other people's things without the consent of the owner. Call me, my heart will be bitter, awkward. If it's an apple, it doesn't look good, it smells bad, it doesn't feel like touching it, it tastes... It's estimated that no one dares to taste it!

What makes the bear baby crazy? It is informal, impolite, and very casual. I am also like this, always messing up the room, and in other people's homes is also informal, greatly embarrassing. I think these habits are very bad, like the bad apple, maybe not a polite light in life!

Through this story, I understand that the original article can be written like this! This not only makes the article interesting and interesting. It also allows readers to have a unique genius for this essay. In addition, the unreasonable little girl is not good, I can't learn from her. I want to be a polite little girl!

Teacher comment: Excellent contact with the actual talk about the real experience. Great!

Third grade: white 婧彤

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