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You don't need too many languages, you don't need gorgeous decoration, just a shallow smile, maybe a miracle. I still remember a story. The general idea is that there was a sensational news in the United States 20 years ago: there was a passerby who gave $60,000 to a 6-year-old girl in California, and this little girl I don't know each other, and the brain has no problem. Later, the little girl, after repeated questioning by her family, finally said with certainty: "He seems to have said a word - your angelic smile has solved my years of depression!" It turned out that passers-by is a rich man, but He is not happy, and his face has always been frosty, and no one dares to laugh at him. When she met the little girl, her sincere smile made his heart feel warm and opened his heart for many years. "This is the power of smile. Look at this story, you may think: just a shallow smile, who will not?" You can indeed see a lot of smiles in life, but are they laughing at heart? ? How many people in the world can use a smile to achieve a certain purpose! The road to life is inevitably rugged, but it is because of the ruggedness that it is more attractive and beautiful. The road to life is inevitably rough, but it is also colorful because of the bumps. When you are sad, sad, and crying, you should tell yourself to face life and face everything. Life needs a smile, and people need a smile. Therefore, the most sincere smile in life is essential. In life, you have the hardships of dream chasing, the joy of success, the pain of frustration, the loneliness of loneliness... At these times, you need friends to smile at you and need friends to comfort you. Smile, not just an action, what she gives, maybe a bright light in the darkness, maybe a slight warmth in the cold. Teacher comment: I was told that smile is the best synonym for praising others, laughing with heart and feeling the world, we can discover that the world is so beautiful. After reading this article, what impressed me the most is the phrase "smile, not just an action, she gave, maybe a bright light in the dark, maybe a trace of warmth in the cold." This sentence not only writes the author's writing purpose, but also tells the center and the main theme of the whole article. While playing the role of finishing the finishing touch, it also raises the article to a higher level. The full text adopts the general structure of the total score, and the idea is clear. With a small story, the power of smiling is introduced, and the link work is done in place, paying attention to the use of individual punctuation. The quotation marks after the "heart" are deleted, and "just one" is preceded by quotation marks. 2009-4-28 9:06:00

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