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Visiting the supermarket


I have had dinner at night, I have to go shopping with my mother in the supermarket, and I don’t want to mention how happy I am. On the road, I am talking and laughing, jumping and jumping, like a free bird, my heart has already flown to the tempting The supermarket stayed on the row of shelves. Coming to the supermarket, there are many people in the sea, not the same. Fearful, as long as I left my mother half a step, I quickly retreated to my mother's side, for fear of leaving with my mother. Starting to purchase, we first came to the washing area on the second floor, bought some necessities with my mother, and then came to the non-staple food area, where I have my favorite, there are mouth watering seaweed, there is no one to endure. It’s so tempting to live with one shrimp and two chips, potato chips, and all kinds of candy, and so on. Think about it and make people drool! However, my mother said that these are junk foods, can not eat more, so every time you come to the supermarket can only buy the same, hehe! No way, I took this and looked at it. I really didn't want to give up any one. When I couldn't make up my mind, my mother seemed to guess my mind and said to me: "Today is Christmas, let you be happy. Just buy it! You have to be temperate!" I listened, I can't wait to hold my mother for three laps. I put all my favorite Dongdong into the shopping basket, and I thought: "When I grow up." I also want to give my mother the money she earned, so that she can enjoy the happiness brought by shopping." I am as busy as I am, and they are rushing to buy what they like. Things, children chasing Santa Claus to run up and down in the elevator, busy! ! On the way back, I had two big bags in my hand, but I didn't feel tired at all. My heart was filled with joy. In order to commemorate this day, my mother taught me an English-the last minute shopping. Teacher's Comments: This is a well-written diary that describes the process of shopping on the supermarket after dinner with my mother. "I don't want to mention how happy I am. On the road, I have laughed and laughed, and jumped and danced like a free little bird." This sentence vividly shows the happy mood of the little author. It can be seen from the mother's speech that the day is Christmas, so the little author enjoys shopping with the permission of the mother. The end of the article is also very special. "Mom taught me an English in order to commemorate this day", which made the event a perfect end. Throughout the full text, it is a good work to grasp the whole shopping process, with outstanding emphasis and reasonable structure. 2008-12-31 19:37:00

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