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How to write good deeds

The common disease of deeds is the same as the material, the main material is the same. The similarities and similarities are similar. The examples of deja vu, the old-fashioned re-emphasis, the stylized chapter, will inevitably affect people, infect people, motivate people, education The purpose of the person. To make the deeds speech unconventional, we must put two good points:
First, the good material screening is to choose the speech materials, and strive for people without me, people have my new. The deeds of themselves or others, do not tire of the collection, but do not tire of the essence of the selection, "fine" It is the typical one that best reflects the essence of life and the style of the times. It must be known that any typical material is personalized, mainly the following two materials:
Unique experience Everyone lives in a certain natural and social environment, and has their own specific and varied experiences. To make a deductive speech, you have to dig out the unique experiences that are called "deeds". Zhou Qing, Luo Hui Jiang’s speech “Women inlaid with lanterns” said: Can you imagine? Once, a geological warrior was alone in a deserted canyon. When he endured ten days and a half of loneliness, he even yelled at the wolf. I am afraid again, but on the contrary I feel kind and excited. However, even this has not shaken his love and thirst for geological career...
For the average person, the "loneness" in the wilderness is very special; even for the geological team members, the feeling of being stunned and excited is not everyone's. This unheard of experience is very impressive. People. Unearthing a unique experience not only has a strong sense of reality, but also can be touching.
In fact, many details are quite similar. However, as long as the details show different time, situation, occasion, appearance, movement, mentality, etc., you can truly write a personalized one. "There was a speech written by a coal miner. Not like most people, to show the common lens of "he" holding a rig to mine coal, but to touch the whole article with unique details:
People ignore the innocent sunshine, but it is very precious to him. The long-term black life of the underground makes him unable to enjoy the sun like ordinary people. His face is black and flat, lacking blood. On this day, he finally has time to sit. In the sun, although the winter sun is not warm. He took off the coal-stained cotton coat, barely basking in the sun, using his body to suck the cold winter light. I saw that pulverized coal has penetrated his skin. Every sweat pore is a bird black! This person who sent the light to thousands of households is so lacking in sunshine, all of them are black. In winter, the upper body is sunbathing. "Every sweat pores are black. This is the distinctive detail captured by the speaker, and it has extraordinary strength in emotional connotation.
Second, to make a good sense of understanding, to grasp the initial feelings that affect people's hearts, to explore the connotation of materials in the emotional sense, and strive to have fresh and deep feelings and views. A good deed speech, must not be:
The unique feelings and deeds are mostly emotional and original. To make the deeds sound like they are heard, if you see the scene, the immersive scene effect, the speaker must grasp the flesh and blood of life-rich things. If you find your own "feeling", you can realize the reality. Some deeds can produce your own feelings even if you can't experience the material, such as Li Feng's "Blood-dyed Kapok":
...The tombstone is only engraved with such words: "Martyrs, women, 19 years old, some health workers." When I was, I seemed to see a thin figure, flashing through the smoke filled with smoke, she rescued The wounded, but he is bleeding too much, the pale face is so tender. Pure... Maybe she is weaving the girl's colorful dreams, someone already loves her; maybe she is loving someone, but the military number is ringing, she put away the girl's Feelings, resolutely went to the harsh battlefield. She was lying on the land in my hometown. For the sake of our generation of young people, she left the world she loved too early. It was only 19 years old, it was the season of life!
Unique insights A deed material is like a multi-faceted crystal. Different viewing angles will “see” different connotations. The speaker should avoid “normal” observation points and use his own eyes to discover novel and unique meanings. The pride of the Communist Party members expressed the pride of "I" after telling the story of the two Communists' tears:
Joining this party is not a bargaining chip, but a ladder to pursue the truth, just like a drop of water into the arms of the sea, just like a soldier heard the horn of marching!
This is not only a personal "experience", but also a spirit of the times. If you use the ready-made slogan and clichés here, not only can not just sublimate the material, but weaken the strength of the material itself.
If you can't give independent insights from the chosen material, you won't be able to make a difference in the story.

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