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Composition and dreams


Composition, a kind of writing format that people use to display literary talents. From ancient times to now, essays have been widely used in people's study and life, becoming a household name. Nowadays, the composition is also high-scoring in the examination, so that the students pay attention to it, but because of this, there is a essay saying fake!

Let us first take a look at a first-year student writing an essay about dreams. He wrote: My dream is to be a chef and bring delicious food to everyone. After the teacher corrected it, he yelled at the student. "How can your ambition be a chef, rewrite!" The student retorted: My dream is to be a boss. The teacher smiled and nodded and gave praise.

In the middle school entrance examination, the essay topic is also a dream. A student's essay plot is interlocking and wonderful. When it comes to dreams, his dream is a game maker. After the batch teacher looks at it, 0 points! This zero point makes it impossible for him to enter the ideal school, and let his dream disappear into the bottom of my heart! In the college entrance examination, he is like learning the lessons of the senior high school entrance examination. He did not write his true dreams boldly on the answer sheet, but changed his dream of a household name. If the composition is fulfilled, it is a perfect score. But his dream has never been realized, because his dream has long been shaken, and there is no firm determination to complete his dream. After all, he did nothing.

The composition is false, why? Dream talk, why? In order to win the so-called high score, take the so-called good school! It is not worth it to give up dreams for high scores! Give up the dream for the teacher's appreciation, not worthy! Only dreams that don’t waver will be successful, not dreams of scores! If you are admitted to a good school, you will have good achievements. This is true. However, since you have given up your dreams, the big achievements are hypocritical, which makes everyone cast aside! including me!

Let us go to the real world together, bid farewell to the essay! Regardless of the score, no matter what the achievement, as long as the dream is still there, it will succeed!

Yuxi, Hongxi District, Yuxi, Yunnan, the first national small sixth grade: firm will succeed

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