It’s raining (see the picture)

In the morning, the bunny flew to the forest to pick mushrooms. On her way home, suddenly there was a cloud over the sky, and it seemed that it was going to rain. In a short while, the raindrops of the beans were smashing down. "What should I do?" The rabbit was flying in a hurry. At this time, she had a chance to move. "Oh, there is a way!" Feifei saw a big mushroom on the grass, and quickly took it off, a beautiful mushroom umbrella made! At this time, the rabbit flew to see two small butterflies who wanted to hide from the rain and flew in the rain. The rabbit flew and waved to them and said, "You are coming to me to hide from the rain!" I immediately flew to the umbrella of the rabbit flying. They are happily going home together! Teacher's Comments: The author's observation of the drawing is very careful. Through the observation of the picture and the author's own imagination, we wrote a complete and interesting story for us. The language used by the small author in the composition is very vivid. "Suddenly, the sky is dark. In a dense cloth, it seems that it is going to rain heavily. In a short while, the raindrops of the beans are smashing down. "The sky image when it rains is very vivid, and people are as immersive." The author also expressed the friendly and kindness of the bunny when expressing the cleverness of the bunny. 2008-11-26 20:28:00

It’s raining (see the picture)

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