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One day Xiaohong and her sister Xiaoli are jumping on the rubber band. How can two people jump? Xiaohong looked around and found two newly planted small trees. Xiaohong and Xiaoli jumped up the rubber band on the small tree and jumped up. The rubber band swayed the tree and kept shaking. The tree shouted desperately. "It hurts! Tired! My waist!" Xiaoshu can't stand the waist, Xiaohong, Xiaoli don't care, just care about their own fun, don't care about Xiaoshu's pain, no effort. Jumping non-stop. "Oh! It hurts!" Xiaoshu has already dropped a few leaves, and they don't care, they continue to jump wildly.

At this time, the two young pioneers ran over and said, "Quickly stop! Stop! Don't tie the rubber band to the small tree!" "We should care for the flowers and trees!" said one of the older sisters. Xiaohong and Xiaoli were embarrassed with their faces, and they took the rubber band off the tree. "Little sister, let's play with you," said the two red-necked sisters. "Okay, okay!" Xiaohong and Xiaoli happily took the hands of the two sisters and cheered.

So, everyone started to jump on the rubber band again, but they did not tie the rubber band to the small tree, but two people pulled the rubber band and the other two jumped. Hey! How happy they are to play! The small tree gradually straightened up, and the green leaves danced shyly in the breeze, as if they were clapping their hands to praise the good boy who changed his mind.

Teacher evaluation: Good! ★★★★★★

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