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Pumpkin (see picture writing)


One day, the little white rabbit picked up a big pumpkin from the pumpkin field, hugged it up and went home. The pumpkin was big and heavy. She was so tired and sweaty. Suddenly, she saw the panda Lili driving a bicycle in the bunny. In the eyes, the tire of the bicycle slowly turned into a pumpkin that was turning. Her eyes were bright. I thought: Put the pumpkin on the ground, don’t you save effort? So she put the pumpkin on the ground, and it’s effortless and fast. At home, the rabbit mother asked the little white rabbit: "How did you bring the pumpkin home? The bunny said the original thing to the mother. Mom praised the bunny; "You are a clever little rabbit. "The little white rabbit listens in the ear and enjoys it in his heart. Teacher's comment: The little white rabbit got inspired from the wheel of the panda Lili riding bicycle, and put the pumpkin on the ground to turn it like a wheel, saving time and effort. The pumpkin was smoothly transported back to my home and I received the praise of the rabbit mother. From the description of the author, we saw that the white rabbit is really a smart and intelligent child. The composition language is smooth and smooth, and the matter is clear and clear. The author's imagination is very rich. The little author wants "Sure enough effort and save it" will be based on different content to divide paragraph essay, writing a rational and better. "Sure enough effort and Come" to be more fluent .2009-4-15 9:23:00

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