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Opening ceremony of the Games


On Wednesday, December 12, 2007, the school is going to open a sports meeting today. We are very happy. As soon as I arrived at the school, there was a lot of people. When the car drove here, it was all over, and some people couldn’t wait, and they went into our school to join in the fun. When you walk into the campus, all kinds of balloons are high and low, colorful, really like the world of balloons, the ocean of people. The flowers and trees in the flower beds seem to be dancing, and the naughty wind baby dirty the tree sister's clothes. At the beginning of the opening ceremony, the students in each class stood tall and headed. Everyone’s spirit was like the Uncle of the People’s Liberation Army. It was powerful and nice to beat. It was awesome! When I put the balloon, everyone wants to fly to the sky like a wish. In that cheer, I can see that the students are very happy. In a blink of an eye, the opening ceremony was over. I had to go home reluctantly. I think the opening ceremony of the Games is really spectacular. I really want to have a regular sports meeting! Teacher comment: I read your article. The teacher knows that you must be very happy at this opening ceremony. I believe other students are also very happy! Your article is fluent, with proper words, clear thinking, vivid description, and good. It’s just that the teacher thinks that it would be better if you could describe the specific content of the opening ceremony more fully. Pay attention to the division of the paragraphs and make the articles hierarchical. The teacher thinks that you will be able to write a better article, come on! 2008-8-3 16:53:00

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