I want to have a happy festival.

I want to make June 30th of each year a happy holiday, because I found that some children are called to read by parents every day, but this is not what they want to do.

One day, I walked down the street and saw a child being beaten by his father with bamboo sticks. The child yelled in his mouth: 'My homework is finished, why don't you let me play for a while? 'His dad said with a sigh of relief: 'When the homework is finished, I go to the book. Who told you to play? In a few days, the exam is not good. I am not white to support you? 'I heard this, really feel unfair to the child, is it because the parents support us only because of the results? Didn't care about our feelings?

Whenever it is on June 30th, children can forget all their troubles and play. You can also go hiking and traveling with a family. At noon, my mother wants to cook a sumptuous dish and everyone celebrates our own holiday. In this day, everyone must be happy, but the most important thing is not to cry.

I really hope to build a happy festival and make the children more lively and cute!

Teacher's comment: This 'Happy Festival' is a very meaningful festival and should be the true idea of ​​every student. The language of the article is fluent, the content is specific, and the expression is clear.

Comments Teacher: Ye Qiuyu

Fourth grade: Gong Lijun